To sum up -

Mrs. Grant decides, within a day or two, to write Kenneth a careful letter, one in which she considers the actual words she uses. There are a number of points where she is in doubt about the word that most fully and suitably expresses her meaning . Assist her in her choice, bearing in mind that none of the possibilities she turns over in her mind is entirely wrong - it is simply a question of suitability. You can see printed below the actual choices that she made though you may still feel that one of the alternatives would have been better!

Elroy Food Ltd.,
11-15 Wai Fu St.,
Tai Wai Industrial Estate, Tai Wai,
New Territories, Hong Kong
1st March 1996

Attn. Mr. Kenneth Kwan

Dear Mr. Kwan,

Your application for the post of Sensory Laboratory Technician

Thank you for coming in to the above on Tuesday of last week . I was very impressed by your application and by the you gave at the interview. I understand that you a rather higher salary than we offer for that post, which is seen as a position, well to someone with some experience, but without a degree. This is, as you are aware, a and rapidly expanding company, and it happens that since we placed this we have two additional vacancies to offer, which are intended for graduates, and which you might to apply for . I enclose particulars, and if you would like to apply I should appreciate an expression of interest from you -

Yours truly

Margritte Grant